User talk:Ems1960

This user is a student editor in University_of_Washington/Interpersonal_Media_(Fall_2020) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:43, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

COM 482 Introduction

Hi Emma! I'm Alia, a senior studying Communication. I'm glad we are taking this class together. Lalevi (talk) 19:16, 9 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Greetings Ems1960 and welcome (again!) to both Wikipedia and to COM482! I think nitro cold brew is a good choice for an article. Although I know it's a stub, the article is rather advanced compared to other stubs and quite a lot of text and citations. As a result, you might need to dig a bit deeper to make significant improvements. I see you've started that and added a little text and done a big of organizing things into sections. That's a good start and I look forward to seeing mroe of that.

Look at the talk page of the article (Talk:Nitro cold brew coffee) for related WikiProjects (like Wikipedia:WikiProject Food and drink) that will have links to excellent articles on similar topics which should point you at models and examples of how to improve the article. I'm looking forward to seeing things developed. Good luck! —mako ๛ 20:06, 19 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Howdy, I'm a somewhat experienced Wikipedia editor and am happy to lend a hand. The nitro cold brew coffee page was my creation back in 2017, and I'm happy to see more people working on it. You can ask me anything on my user talkpage. ☆ Bri (talk) 23:16, 19 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I created a sub page with my peer review for your article on nitro cold brew! I really liked your organization! Emmaaitelli (talk) 18:41, 22 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I left my peer review feedback here: User:Ems1960/Nitro cold brew coffee/Benjamin Charles Baird Peer Review. I thought your article was laid out very nicely and introduces what exactly nitro cold brew is effectively and concisely. Keep up the good work! Benjamin Charles Baird (talk) 23:44, 23 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your draft

Greetings Ems1960! I took a pass on User:Ems1960/Nitro cold brew coffee. I think you may have won the "most peer reviews" contest in the class. Popular subject! Perhaps in part due to this, your article is great shape. I've edited your article to fix a few typos and to add one request for a citation for a claim that feels like it wants a source plus one request for clarification (i.e., what is a nitrogen disc?). I think you might be able to address this easily enough by adding a link to an article that explains it.

Basically, things look great. Why don't you do a final pass to clean up some of this stuff and then move your changes over into the live version. I think with another quick pass, you'll be in really great shape! This is a huge improvement. Thanks for all your work on this! —mako ๛ 19:04, 4 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]