User talk:Emilyboyd3/sandbox
Gaby's peer review:
These all look like great ideas! I think now though it would be beneficial to narrow down your topic and start looking at potential areas where you can add to. You already identified some gaps so you're set! great job.
Emma Dart's peer review response
[edit]Thank you so much for your peer review on my article. Unfortunately the sandbox you reviewed was actually my outline, my first draft is in a new sandbox I created. No worries though! I think that its very helpful that you pointed out that I am trying to cover a lot of information. I'm going to try and maybe cut out some information and solidify my whole article. Thank you so much for your feedback! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emmadart (talk • contribs) 01:25, 2 April 2019 (UTC)