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Emcon789's Peer Review

Emcon789,

I like how you provided an example in your addition to the "Scientists use GRACE data to estimate ocean bottom pressure—as important to oceanographers as atmospheric pressure is to meteorologists" edit. It helped me the reader gain a grasp of how that data is applicable.

I might edit your sentence of "The limited resolution of GRACE is acceptable in this research because the ocean currents are so large, and because deep ocean current estimates can be verified by an ocean buoy network." to "The limited resolution of GRACE is acceptable in this research because large ocean currents can also be estimated and verified by an ocean buoy network." - I felt that having both "because's" in there disrupted the flow of the sentence.

Otherwise, I think you did a good job on adding some more importance and detail to the topic.