User talk:Ellie pellegrino

This user is a student editor in Boston_College/Contested_Monuments_(Spring_2023) .

This user is a student editor in Boston_College/Nineteenth-Century_Art_(Fall_2022) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:23, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Miracles of the Mass of Universal Salvation Conducted by Fifth Karmapa for the Yongle Emperor (hand scroll) (November 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WikiOriginal-9 was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 18:15, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Ellie pellegrino! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 18:15, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tshurpu Scroll (February 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MicrobiologyMarcus was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

youtube is not a reliable source. The section "Motivation for Scroll" is comprised of a single sentence quote and is not explained and its relevance is not demonstrated. I've grouped some sections together under background and description, but the purpose of "Karmapa relationship" and "Yongle's Rise to Power" are not clear. Second image requires a better caption, review WP:Captions.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tshurpu Scroll and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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microbiologyMarcus ^{(petri dish·growths)} 21:35, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]