User talk:Ejd2012

This user is a student editor in Carleton_University/Analyzing_Cinema,_Gender,_and_Sexuality_(Fall_2018) .

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Holly Dale

Looking good! Great that you have already moved your draft to mainspace. It is looking good overall! Here are some suggestions for further improvement:

Always put periods before the reference numbers.
Editors have marked a few sentences with "citation needed." Make sure to add references in each case.
I recommend that you break the "Career" section into several sections: "Early Career," "Short and Feature Films," and "Later Career."
Either turn the two links that are sitting in the Reference section into actual references or move these into External Links.
Look into getting a fair-use image to add to the page.

Chronophoto (talk) 15:12, 15 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]