User talk:EdwardEC
Edward, congrats on your first edit. I made a few other changes to improve the article. Just a few thoughts: 1) If using a url as a ref it is best to format as I have done and to avoid bare links. 2) Try not to over-link, e.g. Member of Parliament wasn't necessary as it does not lead on naturally from the article and Amersham was linked in the first sentence so doesn't need repeating. 3) I linked direct to the English Heritage site rather than the mirror site you originally used. Always best to go direct to the source. 4) The ref goes directly next to the end of the sentence without a space. (Still better than my first efforts though!) Keep up the good work. Philafrenzy (talk) 21:45, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
Smoking Batteries
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Hi Edward, I thought you might like this picture! You can check the code in the edit mode. I learnt how to put images in a page by cutting and pasting layouts which I liked, and just substituting the file name which I found by clicking on the picture! You can always check if you have preview mode on, or revert if things have gone wrong!Leutha (talk) 21:48, 16 August 2011 (UTC)