User talk:Edgarv17/sandbox
Overall I believe that your sandbox on executive order 13492 was very informative and well written. One thing that I would recommend is that at the beginning of your sandbox to provide a definition of executive order 13492 and its significance on the American people. Also since you have a quote, I would recommend adding the citation below your paragraph.
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