User talk:Edenma1/sandbox

Sources

Your sources and citations look great. Go ahead and add the citations to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:19, 21 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

You didn't add the sources to the article properly. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:48, 14 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

Your lead greatly improves an otherwise mediocre article. The biggest problem with the article is that it's all about the U.S., and this needs to be reflected in the title ("in the U.S." should be added).

Instead of saying what counselors should do, describe what they do (they are knowledgeable and non-directive). Of course we know that there are counselors that only promote certain options (usually anything but abortion), but that's not really the topic here.

Once you make the revisions, you can post the lead, but I'd also like you to change the title of the article. Find out how to do it, and if it's not possible, you should at least post a comment in the article talk page suggesting the change.Josef Horáček (talk) 11:21, 26 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]