User talk:Echeverry.catalina/sandbox

Review

Hi Catalina,

I edited some of the minor grammatical mistakes and left my comment in bold, but overall, great job with your Wikipedia article!

--Ntranle (talk) 14:59, 29 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Catalina,

I mainly did some copyediting on your article.

What might apply to your article is the Hispanic-Latino naming dispute, but we live on the east coast so it shouldn't be an issue.

Something you might consider is trying to find out which United Way the article refers to, since there are a couple of articles you could Wikilink to!

-M weth (talk) 05:48, 9 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Catalina

I think you could combine your Objectives & Programs sections into one and just call it "Objectives" or "Goals" or something to that degree, since you go into the four programs in more detail below. Other than that, I think your article flows well and has the right neutral tone! I think any other changes that could be made are stylistic ones using the header texts to distinguish the paragraphs from each other a bit more visually. -Glutenffrida (talk) 15:24, 12 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]