User talk:DuongPauline
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[edit]Hi, Pauline's Wiki Group!
I enjoyed reading your article. Your lead section is concise and organized well, and it gives a sufficient amount of information for readers to gain a basic understanding of the topic. Also, the overall structure of the article is good as well. However, I did not clearly see the link between the prioritization of economic development and water scarcity in the rest of the article. Also, I thought it would be great if you could add more information to each section in the article, so finding more resources may be something you should work on to further develop the article.Urihc (talk) 17:25, 18 November 2019 (UTC)
Hiiii, Pauline!
Overall, the tone and language are very neutral. Each section and paragraph are concise and informative. The table about the background information of Iran is organized and helpful. For me personally, the political climate section is interesting since I didn't know about how politics relate to the water crisis in Iran. Regarding the Water Usage section, if it had some pie charts, it would be really helpful. Since it has a section about the political climate, it can be comprehensive if you included how private sectors and cooperative involve in water management! it might be unnecessary… maybe? It's totally up to you. If there's any information about how people in Iran are dealing with the water crisis, it would be also helpful to understand the topic more. Good job!!!!!!!1 Camille Ponzu (talk) 23:52, 19 November 2019 (UTC)