User talk:Duffey.ka/sandbox

Hi Kathleen,

Out of curiosity where are you planning on placing your addition into the article? One thing I would think about doing is linking some of your psych terms to other wikipedia article. It would help the reader to find information they need to better understand your topic. Your tone is a little bit casual, for example I would think about rewording the sentence "However, the group therapy feeling is not there." Another word other than 'feeling' might be more appropriate. You have good sources for your information and your unbiased throughout your discussion. I might look into adding this some information on mindfulness into my article now since I'm working on 'Treatment of Mental Disorders'. Thanks!Mcdavid.j (talk) 06:57, 8 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hey,

If you haven't already, now would be a good time to add your edits to the main page. Your work is good but a little short. You can add some information concerning the noted health benefits and drawbacks of this practice. The more info the better! Mrw7816 (talk) 20:18, 11 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]