User talk:Drsharma78/sandbox

Hi David,

Excellent work!

I have a few comments:

• Make sure you're using the correct level of header - right now your sections are 2nd level headers, once you put the article live on Wikipedia they should be 1st level headers (big text with the line across)
• Word count is 728 not counting references - I'll give it to you this time but for the final draft be sure to add enough words to get the count over 800 ;)
• Citations look great! You might want to consider formatting them so you don't repeat the same citation more than once, ie. So you'd have [1] several times rather than [1] [2] and [3] being the same source
• You have a gift for writing about history - very well done!

Kairyth (talk) 16:08, 6 April 2016 (UTC)