User talk:Dogyote/sandbox

Your contribution to the "Homelessness" page seems to be very well done! My only recommendation is to restructure the following sentence: "Apartments that are rent controlled encourage people to not move out or pass apartments along between families, this leads to the price of apartments being higher for new renters and, consequently, it is harder for people to afford their rents." It's a run on sentence that could be made more concise by being split up. Other than that I think your research and draft is great. Kmbatt (talk) 21:53, 23 February 2017 (UTC)

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Overall, I thought your contribution to the "homelessness" page was well thought out and pretty accurate. The one thing I would consider changing would be the section that talks about the stigma associated with homelessness. While many people might think of homeless people in this way, it is not the way that the majority of people view homeless people. Consider editing that section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gsoffer26 (talk • contribs) 23:38, 23 February 2017 (UTC)