User talk:Dmn102/sandbox

Good Start

...but it doesn't improve much on the original Shoshoni language page, which is already quite developed. In the instructions on selecting a language, I suggested finding a "stub" article (one which contains very little information) or, failing that, finding an article to which you could contribute a well-designed, informative section. This is neither one or the other. I feel bad for penalizing you for something into which you've obviously put quite a lot of work, but you could have saved yourself quite a lot of trouble by following instructions. Also, your sources are largely online, not from reputable peer-reviewed sources; you could have started with those on the original page, which are quite extensive. Chuck Haberl (talk) 21:28, 6 May 2017 (UTC)