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SO100 - instructor comments
[edit]Hi Dimarius! This is your instructor Sarah. Great draft. This looks like a really solid start to this project. Do you have any questions? I think your sources will work well. Make sure as you read and take notes you are tracking where each piece of information comes from -- down to the page number if necessary -- to cite accurately. Sarahczarita (talk) 20:01, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
SO100 Peer Review
[edit]This is one of your classmates doing the peer review. The draft looks good, your sources look great also. The topic is clear and you maintain a neutral viewpoint. Its great that you are planning to add new information through quotes and pictures.Eccstudent18 (talk) 19:09, 3 April 2017 (UTC)