User talk:Djiang1019
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[edit]Hello, Djiang1019, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:13, 22 June 2017 (UTC)
- SAH DOOD, ITS HANK --173.3.250.207 (talk) 23:33, 26 June 2017 (UTC)
Hi Djiang1019, Thank you for your comments on my sandbox page, best of luck editing your article! Fantinij (talk) 01:57, 21 July 2017 (UTC)
Article peer edit
[edit]1- The article uses a balanced amount of references and citations. The conclusion is relevant and short and sweet.
2- Splitting up the article into multiple sections would make it more organized and easier to see the different ideas. It would also make it easier to distinguish between the different topics discussed. Adding a notes section would also be helpful.
3- The main thing to focus on improving would be adding headlines to divide the article into the topics discussed.
4- Reviewing the article made me realize that I should include more details into my own article and elaborate on the topics I discuss. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sanakareem20 (talk • contribs) 06:51, 30 July 2017 (UTC)