User talk:Diamantesss/sandbox
Citation and references
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https://www.earthmagazine.org/article/danger-and-wonder-nat-geos-giant-crystal-cave
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http://www.bbc.com/news/science-environment-39013829
Review
[edit]Looks pretty good! Very informative and precise about the specifics of the cave. I noticed that in the main body of the article a sentence reads "The main chamber contains giant selenite crystals..." This sentence leaves me with a huge burning question that sounds like "How many chambers are there??" Always nice to get a bit more visual and a small piece of detail explaining more about the chambers could do a lot for the readers mental image of the place. Overall the read was solid. Great job :-) -Brad Kraft
Review
[edit]Your post is very informative. it has new, fresh information with citations. I would just reword some of the sentences to make them less stuffed and easier to read. For example: "However, besides the dangerous conditions,it has been identified as the greatest most important geological discoveries because of the magnificent beauty this cave shows because of its size and icy appearance crystals." I would reword it to "Aside the dangerous conditions, it has been........ due to its magnificent beauty in size and icy crystal appearance." So I would just reread it and check on words. In this sentence, "After the discoveries, group of scientists known as the Naica Project..." insert the word "a group of scientists." Other than that, great job. Igneousrocksrule (talk) 02:03, 2 May 2017 (UTC)