User talk:Deborah Oster Pannell

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Bonkers The Clown (Nonsensical Babble) 06:26, 6 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Deborah Oster Pannell (talk) 18:41, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello!

Thanks for reviewing the article I submitted. In response to your comments, I have removed several sections that, upon re-reading, I determined were probably the source of your note that some of the material was too promotional in nature. I have left only that material that focuses on the significant aspects of this company that have received multiple documentations in various online publications.

I hope the article has now been pared down to its bare bones of just the facts. If you still feel that it does not meet the strict Wikipedia standards, then perhaps you can give me a more specific idea of how I can further edit it to meet the required criteria.

Thanks for taking the time to review this! Deborah Oster Pannell (talk) 18:41, 7 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation

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Mdann52 (talk) 18:07, 6 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]