User talk:Dcollins39/sandbox

Your contributions look good! Your descriptions are thorough, I'm not left wondering about information left out. Your sources look reliable also, which is great. For easier readability, consider numerically listing the five pillars - the paragraph is a little challenging to follow. I think this will also fix the tone a little - the paragraph feels slightly informal, but a list will force more formality. Rshap94 (talk) 04:38, 22 March 2017 (UTC)