User talk:Dcauley5/sandbox

Hello Dwelly, My name is Takiyah and i am in your sociology class. i like your topic of national consciousness, i think it will be easier if you break it up into sections that your can talk about. You could also talk about in what areas of the world you might see these "imagined communities". i also think that the more sources you get the easier it will be to add to this article. Goodluck!! Ttyrell3 (talk) 18:39, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Prof Garcia's Comments

For Week 6: You've done a great job picking a new topic, Dwelly. Keep working at it by finding other sources and articles that talk about National Consciousness. Remember that you can always visit Sarah Hammill for help. One thing, however, is that you HAVE to do the Wikipedia module trainings. You have missed two deadlines for the trainings so far. Alfgarciamora (talk) 11:51, 12 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Dcauley5: You did a great job moving a lot of your content to the mainspace, Dwelly! I especially like that you have started to look at the use of national consciousness by different thinkers (like Benedict Anderson). I think you are well on your way to doing an excellent job with this project. Keep up the great work and make sure that you start to edit your page so that it starts to look like a fully edited Wikipedia article. The best way to do this is to just look at other pages that are already finished and to ask yourself the question: what makes this one look better? Alfgarciamora (talk) 16:43, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Alfgarciamora: Thank you, I appreciate it and yes I definitely will look at a Wiki page that is completed already to see what mine should look like.