User talk:Dbar22/sandbox

Hey Dbar22, good job on the assignment so far! To add a wikilink, you need to put the word of interest between double brackets "[[ ]]" (I'm talking about the word "fungus" and "Trichoderma" in your introductory paragraph). As well, your citations need to be after the period, not before. (You did this near the end, but not in the section "Taxonomy and naming"). Also, genus and species name need to be italicized (I'm specifically referring to the word "Trachoderma" in the first paragraph). Also, if Hypocrea schweinitzii is a species, it needs to be italicized. In the section "description", I think you meant to say "...parasite toward other fungi" (not too sure). Also, the last sentence in your description was a little hard to follow. It might be a good idea to split it up into two sentences. Aside from these minor things, i'd say it looks great! It's clear and easy to follow.

Hi Dbar22, great job in your article so far! I have a few comment to make though. It would be a great idea if you had all of your bullet points organized into paragraphs by now. Also, remember that to relate a word with an article, you have to use "[[____]]". Maybe you could talk a bit more about how it infects humans and the effects the fungus has in us and if it ccan infect animals as well. Also, you could mention some statistics. In some places, you repeated a sentence or the spelling is weird. Maybe you could also talk about the parts if the fungus that activate the immune response. Great work overall!

Lilitiana (talk) 13:01, 30 October 2014 (UTC)

Awesome; you look like you have everything outline the way you want it. I feel though that there should be a little more on the epidemiology of the fungus; try finding out more how the mechanisms of how it works and then look of treatment options of the disease. I found the Web Of Science was great for finding primary sources of literature for treatment options or tests rather. Just remember when you finalize things to italicize things such as the latin name of the fungus and to make sure that you properly link out to other articles such as sacrotrophes. Its better to do this, then to explain each individual term, because wikipedia an encyclopedia. An additional comment would to preferentially make sure that (you are in point form now) to make sure everything flows, and if you don't have enough information or if something is unclear to not use it. But rather seek clarification first then describe it.

Cheers, Ethan EthanBazos (talk) 23:27, 30 October 2014 (UTC)