User talk:Danien22
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:28, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Article Review The article Genetic Studies on Jews very well written and organized. The article discusses most of the major Jewish groups but leaves out a few of the convert groups such as Dutch Jews of color. These convert groups are most likely not going to have a similar lineage to the other Jews but it would be interesting to see if Dutch Jews of color were closely related to one another. I also think that it is important that the article mention the history of genetic Jewish testing. A lot of testing occurred during WWII and I think the “racist” data and testing should be discussed in this article. On a grammatical note, there are a few run-on sentences such as paragraph three of the "Recent Studies" section. The article does a great job describing the lineage of each Jewish sub-group but lacks information for Ethiopian and Indian Jews. While there is probably much more information on Ashkenazi and Sephardic Jews, the article is too heavily focused on those groups. There is a great amount of sources and each link appears to work. There is a great variety of sources but some are slightly biased. Many articles from the Jerusalem Post argue that Jewish people are more closely related than non-Israeli articles. The article does a good job explaining the samples used in testing but does not elaborate on how the DNA was tested. This is an extremely well written, informative article, with tons of reliable sources. My only recomendation would be to sort through the few biased articles, edit run on sentences, and add more information on smaller Jewish subgroups.Danien22 (talk) 18:26, 18 September 2018 (UTC)
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Hi.
I reverted your edits to this article, because it appeared to me that you deleted sourced material and replaced it with unsourced material. If I am incorrect in this estimation, please explain why on the article's talk page.
Thanks, Beyond My Ken (talk) 00:05, 3 December 2018 (UTC)