User talk:Daniel Carnahan

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Commentary 12/5/18, IPE

Eriadorian (talk) 01:41, 6 December 2018 (UTC)Eriadorian

1) the lead section for this article should include the following; it cannot start off with tourism in Tanzania, it must focus on macroeconomic and geostrategic context. It should focus on the most relevant factors such as population, gdp, etc. Broad strokes.

2)A Clear structure. Paragraphing should be concise and follow a recognizable pattern and be a contributor to the overall order of this article

3)Balanced coverage based off the policy memo you have a good grasp of the situation, remain balanced in presenting it

4)Neutral content Your sources look good, make sure you dont over use a couple of them and unbalance the whole article.

5)Reliable sources Your sources are reliable, present them well and youl be fine.

A page you started (Tanzania and the World Bank) has been reviewed!

Thanks for creating Tanzania and the World Bank.

I have just reviewed the page, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

As others have pointed out, the article needs to incorporate more citations to sources not affiliated with the World Bank

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_signed, Rosguill ^talk 22:51, 16 January 2019 (UTC)