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[edit]Good plan.
Well written, though some sentences are maybe a bit short and choppy (make 'em flow!).
Need a secondary source!
Vellichor (talk) 19:30, 4 November 2015 (UTC)
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[edit]Hey, I'm probably going to start on this tomorrow, if you have any last minute changes, let me know!