User talk:Damarisgomez
March 2014
[edit]Hello, I'm JNW. I wanted to let you know that I undid one or more of your recent contributions because it appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. JNW (talk) 14:55, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
Hello, I'm JNW. I noticed that you made a change to an article, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so! If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. JNW (talk) 14:55, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
- Please read Wikipedia's guidelines re: WP:NPOV and WP:COI as well. Thank you, 14:55, 5 March 2014 (UTC)JNW (talk)
Thank you for your help, I will try to reword the document and add more citations where it is necessary. Can you also please point out what in particular was unacceptable? I thought a lot of what was removed was objective information, so I am surprised it was reduced down so much. Damarisgomez (talk) 15:54, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
- Yes; everything you re-added after I'd removed it was promotional in tone [1], suitable for a press release but not a neutral encyclopedia entry. In making the revision you also restored much unsourced content and removed valid maintenance templates. The same issues applied to the edits of the other account--I'm assuming an associate of yours--who has worked on the article. JNW (talk) 16:38, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
I understand, I will change the tone as best I can, I updated the requested references. Thank you for your help. Damarisgomez (talk) 19:59, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
Damarisgomez, you are invited to the Teahouse
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