User talk:DMcCune80/sandbox/articledraft

I think you did a great job of adding more detail to the article. Your information was relevant to the article and helped the reader to get a better understanding of Anglo-Saxon dress. The Materials and Women's Clothing sections of the article added much more information and you did a very good job on finding more solid facts. This might be difficult to research, but I would try to find more information for the Children section of the article. Also, I would add your sources to the article to make your edits more credible. Lastly, I think it would help the article if you added more complete sections to it because it is on the shorter side. Maybe add a section on the reason why they dressed the way that they did.

Peer Review from Jessica

You did a really, really good job with edits you made to this article. I think that the additional information that you provided throughout the article is very useful, you definitely did add more content in the areas where it was lacking, so good work figuring out where to make edits. I understand it's probably not the easiest topic to find more information on, but if anything, the children section could probably use a little more detail if possible. Other than that, the style of your writing was good, and the edits you made will definitely add a lot more substance and interesting knowledge to the article. There are a few minor spelling/grammatical errors in your draft, but they are very minor. Also, there might be a few sentences you added throughout the article that sound a little bit awkward, but that's really all. The actual additions you made to the article were especially really good! That article will definitely be more interesting and informative than it was originally.

JessicaMolinari (talk) 20:22, 27 March 2018 (UTC)Jessica Molinari