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Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: Keronica Grant
Date of review 5/6/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: DJames5
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DJames5/Motivated-Hygiene_Theory
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/7/2013
Date review submitted to instructor
Length of edit (too long/too short) perfect length
Image (needed/appropriate) image not needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) The information provided was accurate from the text book
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)
Wikiformatting Add numbers to bring out the page a little more
Grammar & composition None
Other comments Good job.

Keronica Grant (talk) 17:22, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]



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Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User:SRampersaud
Date of review 4/23/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User: DJames5
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DJames5/Motivated-Hygiene_Theory
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 4/23/2013
Date review submitted to instructor 4/23/2013
Length of edit (too long/too short) Exceeds requirement
Image (needed/appropriate) image not needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) The information provided was accurate from the text book
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) The article information was relevant to I/O Psych topic and added information was accurate from the text.
Wikiformatting adding bullets can help
Grammar & composition None
Other comments Good job.
Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User:Fernando18
Date of review 5/1/2013
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User:DJames5
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DJames5/Motivated-Hygiene_Theory
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/1/13
Date review submitted to instructor 5/1/13
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) need a image if possible
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Very accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed Primary
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) N/A
Wikiformatting N/A
Grammar & composition None
Other comments Two Thumbs Up
Name of student reviewer **Replace with username for version on talk page** Wikipedia User:Xyzbb1253
Date of review 5/4/13
Name of editor**Replace with username for version on talk page** User:DJames5
URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DJames5/Motivated-Hygiene_Theory
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 5/4/13
Date review submitted to instructor 5/4/13
Length of edit (too long/too short) Appropriate
Image (needed/appropriate) N/A
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) Accurate
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed Primary
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) congruent to I/O psychology
Wikiformatting Needs 'in-text' citation http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citing_sources
Grammar & composition Grammar OK, numbers aligned
Other comments none
Reviewer's Signature Xyzbb1253 (talk) 09:00, 4 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]