User talk:Czsargo
Grammar Edits
[edit]Nice work on the Human Torch page. Mcwabaunsee 22:35, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
ManTech
[edit]"...the Intelligence Community and departments of Defense, State, Homeland Security and Justice; the Space Community; and other government agencies." Watch out for grammar errors here.
It looks like there could be some organizational improvements to the ManTech article. Maybe break it up in terms of their activities, their personnel, etc.?
Remember that we concentrated on environmental sections because they're a necessary component in the character of a corporation. What about an environmental section? Mcwabaunsee 22:35, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
FedEx
[edit]The information in this section might be more appropriate in a history section. Does FedEx donate money? Make campaign contributions? Mcwabaunsee 22:35, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
Tom Tancredo
[edit]Nice work here. Can you give an example of a donation directed toward a single issue? Mcwabaunsee 22:35, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
Mitt Romney
[edit]Nice work here as well. Mcwabaunsee 22:35, 15 November 2007 (UTC)