User talk:Cyclones2

Welcome!

Hello, Cyclones2, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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Your edits to Defensive backs coach

I removed your edits. They were unreferenced, and Wikipedia is not a game guide. However, if you know of any websites which talk about this coaching role, please add a section for "External links" and add those links. Thank you. Shalom (Hello • Peace) 20:38, 27 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, I'll put back what you had. Just give me a moment please. Shalom (Hello • Peace) 20:45, 27 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Let me know if there's anything I can do to help you. Shalom (Hello • Peace) 20:46, 27 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

There are some formatting changes I would recommend. You use bold and ALL CAPS too much. Remove those. You can use * to make bullet points, like this

Drill 1
Drill 2

This may be helpful. You can also request that another Wikipedian review your work by adding {{Copyedit}} to the top of the page. Actually, I'll add that myself, along with one other tag. Shalom (Hello • Peace) 20:54, 27 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]