User talk:Cvdunn/sandbox

On my page, I still need to add more scholarly references to help make more of the point of why social media in education is important but can have its downfalls. I also would like to go a little bit more in-depth with the USE passage on my page. I want to talk about how the different usages may have their downfall and how sometimes social media can't give what the classroom might.

Good progress, but be sure when you publish changes you fill out the "edit summary" box so it is easy to follow what you changed. Also, just to confirm this is the sandbox you are focusing on now, yes? As your draft is due next week, and that is what I assign your peer reviewer, I just want to be sure all of your work will be in the same sandbox. There is a lot of writing improvement that is needed here, and you want to make sure you have citations for everything. For example this sentence does not appear to be based on any specific citations: " In 2021 technology is expanding and with the world in a pandemic it is making a lot easier for students and teacher to understand and use technology.Now teachers are using Zoom, Slack, Instagram, Google Classroom, Canva, and Canvas to connect and communicate with their student easier." Be sure you do not editorialize and only add content you are citing.Adrishaw (talk) 20:13, 22 March 2021 (UTC)