User talk:Cstorm44/Critical Mass(sociodynamics)
Peer review comments
[edit]I think to expand on you page it would help to discuss the theory's limitations and known instances in which the argument for critical mass adoption was not the case and how researchers understood and explained those moments/instances. Another way to expand understanding of the theory would be to discuss it’s position within previously set theories and how this expanded on those or broke away from those. Hope this is helpful! -Laura — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.143.0.64 (talk) 23:08, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
I think you are doing a great job so far! This page clearly needs a lot of work from what is currently posted and I think you've already really improved upon it with all the sections and information you have added. I like how you have added an Interactive Media section and have begun to expand upon how the theory can be applied to technology. It would be interesting to see if the theory also applies to the mass adoption of social media. I also agree with Laura's suggestions! - Rachel (talk)