User talk:Cs at 1216/sandbox

Names should be linked for respectable persons. Links for things like "Enlightenment" should also be included. Section titled "Life": - should be split into separate sections as on wikipedia biography template. Please insert infobox template for writer/feminist/whatever she is. It is a convention to only capitalize the first letter of each header. The wikipedia training of section 3, Elements of not-so-great articles, says that value statements, such as "the best" or "the most important" are flags that it's written to persuade, or at least, not properly referenced. For examples, there are several places where you say "most well-known work" or "the famous novel" which is not neutral. The sources seem appropriate. Phams99 (talk) Peer Review Part 2: I think there are more things can be linked such as embezzling, Kustrin, Brunswick, Potsdam, University of Kiel, progressive, doctorate, philosophy, Pedagogical Institute in Hamburg-St Georg. (if that exists), marital eqaulity (wikipedia has marriage equality), Kant, and Leibniz. Phams99 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 14:41, 21 November 2017 (UTC)