User talk:Crsheridan
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[edit]Hello, Crsheridan, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:33, 13 February 2018 (UTC)
NS1150 article selections
[edit]Hi Crsheridan,
In reviewing your article choices I would recommend that your best option for solid editing would be to select the article on "Master cleanse". You can edit "Red meat", but it may be harder to find good information to add to that article. I am going to assign you Master cleanse, but please let me know if you feel strongly about editing the article on Red meat! Saguaromelee (talk) 18:48, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
Feedback for annotated bibliography
[edit]Hello! I like how you included some resources that are books. I would recommend you try to find a couple systematic review articles or meta-analyses to provide more depth to your edits. Your summaries were a bit light for the annotation and it is not clear how some of these resources will be used for your final edits. Keep in mind that the annoatation process can help make the writing process easier as you have already synthesized the information. Let me know if you have any questions. Saguaromelee (talk) 19:17, 11 April 2018 (UTC)