User talk:Cronkam/sandbox
Peer Review
[edit]Hello Amanda,
I think the additions you are making to your article are very good! The specific organisms handwashing will prevent shows more detail. I think the information that you added was backed up by relevant studies and does a nice job bringing the information together. I think this data makes the results more significant and meaningful to readers. Nice job!
-Alex Kelly
Reply to Alex
[edit]Hello Alex,
Thank you so much for your input! I agree and also thought that listing the specific microorganisms would help create detail and make the importance more real. I will keep editing and improving my article with the input you gave me.