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August 2023

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The current article leads you to believe that Vigor was the sole company involved in the building of Sea Hunter. In fact Leidos, Inc was the prime contractor, designer, and developed all the autonomous systems. That's not advertising, it's fact. A simple search on line will produce numerous articles including the following: https://defbrief.com/2021/04/08/leidos-delivers-second-sea-hunter-medium-usv-to-us-navy/

So not only did Leidos prime the first vessel, they were the prime (second one built by USMI in Mississippi) contractor on the second vessel of the class called Seahawk. Also verifiable even on the Leidos website. Crf59 (talk) 23:06, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

https://www.cnbc.com/2020/03/11/navy-next-drone-warship-sea-hunter.html Crf59 (talk) 23:18, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

https://www.maritime.dot.gov/sites/marad.dot.gov/files/docs/about-us/foia/11706/leidos-inc-sea-hunter-and-maritime-autonomous-behaviors.pdf Crf59 (talk) 23:20, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

So as I read this yet again, it occurs to me that I did not answer your original question. I am the Chief Technology Office for Leidos. I am not being paid to edit this document, but as the proud CTO for the organization responsible for Sea Hunter and Seahawk, it is unsettling that this Wiki page is so incomplete and inaccurate on the genesis of the Sea Hunter. It also perplexes me that you chose an article actually written by Vigor as the substantiation for their claim that they built Sea Hunter for DARPA. Vigor was not even the original builder and they had no interaction with DARPA. It was Christensen Yachts until they went bankrupt and we then contracted Vigor to complete the build of a hull that had already been fabricated. So the article is incorrect on several topics. So since you are so sure of your standards, check out the following as justification for my claims. Perhaps you should check yourself a little more thoroughly.

https://news.usni.org/2021/04/08/navy-takes-delivery-of-sea-hawk-unmanned-vessel

http://www.navaldrones.com/ACTUV.html

https://www.globalsecurity.org/military/systems/ship/actuv.htm

https://spectrum.ieee.org/darpa-actuv-self-driving-submarine-hunter-steers-like-a-human

https://www.militaryaerospace.com/uncrewed/article/16719649/darpa-awards-contract-for-antisubmarine-warfare-continuous-trail-unmanned-vessel-program

https://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/saic-awarded-prime-contract-by-defense-advanced-research-projects-agency-178857671.html

https://www.naval-technology.com/news/newsdarpa-selects-saic-asw-actuv-prototype/?cf-view

https://www.defense.gov/News/Speeches/Speech/Article/779197/remarks-at-the-actuv-seahunter-christening-ceremony/

https://govtribe.com/award/federal-contract-award/definitive-contract-hr001112c0086 Crf59 (talk) 22:10, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]