User talk:Crcarrier

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:22, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review 1

Hey,

I'm not positive how much of the wikipedia page you've edited, but I'm just going to review the whole page. Maybe it'll help you figure out what to edit. Lead:

  The lead is a bit thin. It's straight to the point, but it can probably be expanded upon like when it first was in the Winter Olympics or where it's most popular.

Structure:

  The article flows pretty well with history -> styles -> equipment. You could put equipment before styles since it seems pretty stable across kinds of skiing. I'm also not a skier so I'm possibly wrong. 

Balance:

   The bulk of the content seems to be in aerial skiing. Every other section seems pretty thin. Maybe look at expanding those other sections.

Neutral:

   The tone seems neutral despite the focus being on aerial skiing. I just think the overall balance puts more emphasis on aerial skiing.

Sources:

   Most of the sources seem to be for the history. Maybe it's possible to find some sources for the other aspects of the article.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nslabczynski (talk • contribs) 02:55, 18 April 2018 (UTC)