User talk:Coryadelson
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:22, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review #2
[edit]The Lead Section: - I do feel satisfied with the information for this topic! - It does report the most significant information.
Structure: - The sections are organized very well. I really enjoy how there is an awards section and distillery section.
Balance - I think a major point that would be beneficial to add would be the history behind the tequila. - Nothing is off topic!
Neutral - The article is very neutral. - It is from the perspective of someone who has tried the tequila and is giving their point of view. - Nope! The first sentence really sets the tone for the rest of the article, "Tequila El Espolòn is a brand of tequila from Campari America, the sixth largest spirits company in the United States."
Reliable sources
- Right now, all I see that needs attention is at the end of the sentence, "It is the first tequila to release variants of reposado.[citation needed]" and there needs to be a citation for that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ctrepanier96 (talk • contribs) 19:28, 7 May 2018 (UTC)