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[edit]Hello, Coltonschuh, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:10, 22 September 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi. User:Shalor (Wiki Ed) is actually the Wikipedia expert assigned to your class. But I'm not sure what you mean by "proper format" for an outline. We can give you advice on how to format a Wikipedia article, but the required format of an outline is probably something you'll need to get from your instructor. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:17, 20 October 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Hello! First off, I want to say great job! Your outline and all of the information you want to add are all relevant to the topic. I think that maybe adding something (if you can find a source) that talks about the use of the temple for housing art would be great.
A. Mithraic Religion and artwork.
1. Mithraism is considered a very ancient and mystical religion which was originally inspired by the Persians, who had been practicing Mithraism.[1]
a. Focus is on the Mithras, which were the gods of this religion.
b. Worship the god Mithras, who had been born from a rock.[1]
c. Mithraism is often looked at as a cult, by many modern day scholars.[2]
d. Mithraic temples are typically always underground.
e. Mithraism has its origins in the ancient Roman Empire. But temples have been found in several countries including Germany, UK and Bosnia.
f. It was originally inspired by the Persians, who had been practicing Mithraism.[1]
g. The origin of study was brought about by Franz Cumont in 1896.[3]
2. The god Mithra in artwork.
a. Much of Mithraic iconography has been translated by scholars through the years in order to better help support the theories of scholars in their work.[4] *(this would be a great chance to cite the scholars and what their studies have to do with Mithraeums) b. One of the best known examples of iconography in Mithra sculpture and relief work is the birth of Mithra. After having been born naked from a rock wearing nothing but a Phrygian cap, the newborn god Mithra holds a torch in his left hand and a dagger in his right, intending to kill the bull.[4]
c. Much of what scholars know about Mithraic temples is known through the hundreds of works that had been excavated and studied. These include monuments and artworks whose subject features the famous Mithra bull-killing scene, depicted over 700 times in different works.[2] *(I think there might be a way to reword the first statement to make it flow better.)
d. Birth scenes of the god Mithra depicted in ancient artwork often vary in different locations. Some of these works are displayed as being rather simplistic in style, which the artist does not use fine detail, and the simplicity of representation, where the artist is able to give the viewer an incredible amount of information without having displayed much content.[5]
"Mithraism". Wikipedia. 2017-10-18. "Mithraism". Wikipedia. 2017-10-18. Griffith, Alison Bond. "The Archaeological Evidence for Mithraism in Imperial Rome." Order No. 9409698, University of Michigan, 1993. http://proxy.lib.csus.edu/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.proxy.lib.csus.edu/docview/304073109?accountid=10358. Schofield, Alan. "The Search for Iconographic Variation in Roman Mithraism." Religion 25, no. 1 (1995): 51-66. Schofield, Alan. "The Search for Iconographic Variation in Roman Mithraism." Religion 25, no. 1 (1995): 51-66.