User talk:Cmckean02

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:54, 8 February 2022 (UTC)

Hello, Cmkean02

I just peer reviewed your article on Agriculture. Thank you for peer reviewing my article on Norm Charlton. I thought your advice was very helpful and I will definitely make the changes you suggest. I'm still looking for additional sources and hoping to add. 1517luther (talk) 03:44, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

Your draft

Hi. I've returned your draft to your sandbox because it isn't ready to go "live" in Wikipedia's mainspace

• The title "Benefits of Certain Agricultural Production Systems" wasn't appropriate for a Wikipedia article. Wikipedia articles are supposed to be about specific things - "certain" systems is too vague. They're also supposed to approach topics neutrally - they can't simply address "benefits".
• You have no inline citations, which makes it difficult for readers to verify factual statements in your article. Every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module.
• Wikipedia articles are meant to be modular - when it comes to a related topic like animal husbandry, you don't need to define it. Give readers just enough information to keep reading, but link to the main article so those people who want to know more can click through to learn more. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:35, 29 March 2022 (UTC)