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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abuse_prevention_program http://preventchildabuse.org/

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ceremonial_marriage http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/j.0022-2445.2004.00058.x/abstract;jsessionid=A7824110397ADFC18AB9E623C9320758.f02t04

https://web.archive.org/web/20000820051947/http://www.practicalparent.org.uk/WINNING%20THE%20BEDTIME%20BATTLE.htm https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bedtime

SO100 - instructor comments

Hi Catherine! This is your instructor Sarah. Great draft. One question/comment -- is this for child abuse or does it include elder abuse? If it's just a focus on kids, the title of the article may need to be changed? Just a thought. Definitely be careful about using information from organizations directly -- they can be biased in how they portray themselves, so double check what they say by looking up news articles or books or other sources that are more independent.Good start. Let me know if you have questions as you work on this. Sarahczarita (talk) 19:52, 26 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

SaraE=Peer review comments

Your draft is done very well and seems neutral! Your sources touch every aspect that you are trying to highlight in your article. It would be interesting to hear about all the different types of prevention programs that are offered for abuse but I understand you only going into full detail on a couple of them. The only question I had is if you are focusing on just child abuse or if you are including other kinds of abuse (elderly, domestic, etc.) But, so far so good!! :-) SaraEagen (talk) 04:56, 4 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]