User talk:Cmazmani/sandbox
TA Comments:
In-text citations: yes
Professional tone: yes
Paraphrasing real science: yes
Grammar and spelling: overall good
Links to other wiki articles: yes
Score: 20/20
Peer Review:
The structure and flow of this article make it simple for a reader to follow the information. The references are incorporated to provide the reader additional resources to read. The reader clearly read the sources, understood the material, and formulated it in his or her own words, showing depth of research and understanding.
However, I suggest to change the sentence structure a bit to avoid ambiguous words and pronous, such as "they." Instead of writing the article in the format of an essay, it should be written as an article to be published to a wider audience.
KIROLLOS, MONICA Peer Review: 20/20
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