User talk:Clymernl/sandbox
Peer Review
[edit]-Clear structure and flow of the "Federal" section -Reintegrate mutual aid/disaster response section into other parts of the "Federal" section -Add "For" in front of second sentence of "County police" section -Make a special section for the out-of-place Commonwealth of Virginia within "County police" section -Clear and concise explanation provided by "Sheriff's offices" section -Change/delete the "so of course" part of the following sentence in "Controversies" section: "Law enforcement is one of the only professions in America that is allowed to use force against the population so of course there are going to be controversies, most of which involving the death of African Americans." -Add more time periods/events to "Controversies" list -Correct grammar issues in first 2-3 sentences of 1960s section of "Controversies" list -Delete comma after the word "as" in "The county police is in charge of typical police duties such as, patrol and investigations." found in "County police" section