User talk:Cloebugg
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[edit]Hello, Cloebugg, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:38, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
Hey Cloebugg! I hope you find Wiki Ed as a fun way to learn. Theodorerex (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 01:26, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
Peer editing: Hey! Really nice work on your article. There's a ton of really useful information that you used, and it's explained in a very easily understood way. I think it'll be useful for audiences ranging from high school students to educated adults. Some things I would fix would be a few grammatical errors (capitalizations, misspellings) throughout the article. Just proof read it before you make changes. Another thing would be to link as much as you can to other wiki pages and add more references if possible! Otherwise, I really enjoyed reading your article! Theodorerex (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 19:34, 14 November 2016 (UTC)
Peer editing 2Luxord185 (talk) 01:45, 16 November 2016 (UTC): Hello Cloebugg. I think this is a really good article. As Theorerex said, the information is mostly easily understood. There are a couple of terms that could use some further explaining, discoidal reduction for example, but i think this is a good start. Also, you mention how the site has really good preservation, i think you could add a sentence or two explaining what preservation means to the archaeological record and why it's such a rare find at Ngalue. Finally, because you added the section about botanical (starch) remains, I think a paragraph on the paleoenvironmental reconstruction of the site would be useful to readers.
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[edit]Hi Cloebugg! This class is going to be awesome! Peryalacoirea (talk) 18:46, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]Excellent work on your additions to the Ngalue article. One quick note, the citation to the article from Nature should be in the same format as the other citations in the article, which includes information like author, publisher, and doi if available. Please let me know if you have any questions. Rob (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:03, 22 November 2016 (UTC)