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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (November 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by JavaHurricane were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The references do not have to be put into the prose as in-line external links (see WP:REFB); and in any case, in-line external links are prohibited. Also, the tone of the prose needs significant improvements. The draft reads more like a promotional piece than like an encyclopedia article.

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Java Hurricane 06:55, 22 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Claudysagal! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Java Hurricane 06:55, 22 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dear @JavaHurricane. I really appreciate your help and indications. I think I need more help to understand what type of reliable sources are needed. Even though I already read all the links you nicely attached, I can’t understand how more it’s needed . Unfortunately, Guatemala idiosyncrasies do not include a proper support to their artists. They have to go to another countries looking for support. Also, Nery Cano is dead and any other information is hard to find. Anyway, I could find books, magazines and newspapers where he is mentioned, even in Wikipedia his name as an outstanding trumpet player is the only one mentioned.

Could you please indicate me which adjectives are out of a formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article? So I could look for a better way for writing. I’m pretty new in Wikipedia and all explanations in a colloquial language could help me to understand much better. I will really appreciate all help you could provide me. Thanks a lot for your time and help.

Sincerely,

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Claudysagal

Dear Java/Hurricane, I just made some changes to the Biography trying to avoid very personal information and adjectives that could sound no neutral in order to write in encyclopedic way. I still have some confusion with the references. As I told you before there is not enough support for Guatemalan musicians in their country and any of the sources are in Youtube. Also due to the Pandemic, almost all the Sympathy and Condolences from Guatemalan Government and Official Institutions to Nery Cano’s dead, were published in Facebook that I understood this links are not acceptable in Wikipedia. It could be a real pity that a musician and conductor as Nery Cano Biography which legacy is very important for the Guatemalan music, could be declined. That is why I need your help to do my best in the Wikipedia policies. Thanks a lot again.

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 Claudysagal (talk) 03:33, 23 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I just saw your messages. If you want to ping someone, use {{ping|Username}}, though in some cases, like me, you'll have to leave a message on my talk page as such users have turned off pings. (In my case, certain pesky vandals abused the notification system to irritate me). I'll have a look and let you know my thoughts shortly. Java Hurricane 02:40, 24 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

For now, you need not leave me messages on my talk page; I will be watching this page and will reply to you regularly. Java Hurricane 02:55, 24 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

[Java]

Dear @Java/Hurricane, Thank you for your nice reply. Even that Wikipedia does not accept links from Facebook as references, I would like to include the most important of them in this space, because they are hundreds, in order you could considerate the importance of Nery Cano in the music of Guatemala. Thaks again for your nice help.

The National Symphony Orchestra of Guatemala, Cultural Heritage of the Nation, mourns the death of Maestro NERY EVELIO CANO ARREAGA.

Government of Guatemala and the Ministry of Culture and Sports of Guatemala mourns the death of Maestro Nery Cano.

Government of Guatemala and the Ministry of Defense of Guatemala mourns the death of Lieutenant Colonel(WO), Nery Evelio Cano Arrega

All the teachers team of the National Music Conservatory of Guatemala mours the Death of Maestro Nery Cano.

USAC University of San Carlos de Guatemala mourns the death of Maestro Nery Cano, who contributed with the composing of our hymn of this

I am still looking for important website to and books for references, I alredy found some like these: https://www.mindef.mil.gt/Organizacion/2estado_mayordef/servicios/9servicio_musicam/9servicio_musicam_historia.html

https://mcd.gob.gt/danza-musica-y-misticismo-se-fusionan-para-inaugurar-las-actividades-del-bicentenarioguatemala/

Thanks a lot.

--Claudysagal (talk) 16:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nery Cano has been accepted

Nery Cano, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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Rusalkii (talk) 01:03, 16 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]