User talk:ClaudiaEE/sandbox

Peer review

Hi, I really enjoyed your article and think it gives a good overview of the butterfly with the sections included. I went through and made some minor edits- such as adding hyperlinks, italicizing species names, and correcting capitalization issues (cerrado is not a proper noun!). I also reworded some sections to condense and clarify. I know the article is still incomplete at the moment, but I also noticed that there were no citations included. This made it a little difficult to clarify sections that I was confused about- for example, in the Predators section, you mention that it is interesting that “the ants who predate E. bechina are known to tend larvae of the families Lycaenidae and Rionidae.”- I would make explicit why that is interesting as I did not understand why that was. Thank you! liu.emily 22:13, 31 October 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review

Good article, although I'm sure it'll be even better when completed! Issues included lack of any citations, and indication of future sections when there were none (such as when you identified four stages in the life cycle but did not have entries on two of them). For now, the small changes I've made are all I can do without knowing sources, but I'm sure that you'll get it all wrapped up soon. Best, Alexander Mahmoud (talk) 02:14, 1 November 2017 (UTC)