User talk:Claire.tranchino/sandbox
This is not a big deal, but a title would really help! I also think giving a little definition or description of what an existentialist feminist is in the beggining would be helpful. Event though the next sentence includes it, it might be hard for someone who doesn't know what an existentialist feminist is. Great use of footnotes! You did a good job with no biases present ! I think your article if off the a great start. The only big thing I would say is adding more to the conclusion and connection to the ERA , but I think that will come as you continue to write.
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