User talk:Cky8675309

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Hey. So i looked over your article pre-changes and have some suggestions for things you could do to improve it. The first thing is the paragraph under the header "influences". The first 2 paragraphs are full of citations, but the following three paragraphs contain only a single citation. It may be a good idea to fill in some more information with sources under this header. The rest of the article is well cited, so you don't really need to add much in that regard. Another thing I could suggest would to be more specific in terms of what specific classes were able to afford which educations. The article is pretty vague, only really listing the children as "rich" or "more humble". A sort of index about which members of society could afford higher education and what their families did may help readers with further comprehension of the topic. Sbuch6 (talk) 20:50, 7 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]