User talk:Christina42M
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:58, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
Feedback on Daniela Blanco draft
[edit]Hi @Christina42M, Alicelogova, Injim101:
Nice work on your draft for Daniela Blanco! I have some feedback for you as your group continues to draft.
Sources & Inline citations: Well done on the inline citations. Keep using them after each sentence. As for sources, social media wouldn't be considered a reliable source so I suggest finding another source to replace it. Also be sure to use the MIT Technology Review source. Getting on that list is a big deal, and works to satisfy the topics notability. Here are some additional sources that can be used to support the text.
- https://www.nyas.org/magazines/help-wanted-all-positions-stem-skills-preferred/i-am-a-scientist-should-i-be-an-entrepreneur/
- https://www.inc.com/entrepreneurs-organization/the-2019-eo-gsea-global-champion-bringing-sustainability-to-chemical-industry.html
- English version https://www.innovatorsunder35.com/the-list/daniela-blanco/
You have three references at the bottom of the draft. Make sure to use those using the cite tool, or remove them.
If you have any questions about my feedback, feel free to reach out. Well done so far! Looping in Davidmpena. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:02, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- Hi Brianda,
- Thank you for your feedback. Not sure why it was showing that source as a facebook article when I used the auto citation feature because it links to https://valiantceo.com/sunthetics-daniela-blanco/. I manually put in the info now, so hopefully that source is okay?
- And thank you for sharing those additional sources, that's very helpful! Christina42M (talk) 22:20, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- Hm.. That is interesting, but glad you were able to fix it. I can see there are still some formatting issues with a couple of your references. I'll go in and fix them. Thanks for engaging with me! If you have any other questions, feel free to ping me.
- Once you are ready to move it to the mainspace check out this training module. Well done @Christina42M! Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:08, 23 June 2023 (UTC)