I think what this article does well is that it breaks down the information well and allows the reader to understand. For example, in the blade sharpness section, the information remains neutral. It goes into the object, the types of uses and then for ice skates, specially, they go into deeper as in how it works in a competition. However, there are some things that could be improved. For example, maybe try and find more sources to reference one of the objects. Another thing to maybe work on is maybe add images or an image reference (not copyrighted) to see what you mean by blade sharpness and/ or terry cloth.
