User talk:Chickenkicker96

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20:02, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

deleted sandbox?

@Chickenkicker96: Did you mean to delete the content from your sandbox? If it was an accident you can revert to a previous edit! AugusteBlanqui (talk) 09:32, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

comments on draft

This is a good draft. You've found some good sources. Suggestions:

There is an excess of citations (every sentence); we'll discuss strategies for consolidating citations in class.
For the lead: The siege of Kilkenny occurred in 1650 as part of Cromwellian conquest of Ireland. [then a sentence on significance, ...as a result...]
Some copy editing to catch minor errors

AugusteBlanqui (talk) 14:41, 23 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]